Wednesday 21 September 2011

Help on a character history?

I play LARP (Live Action Role Play) and I'm making a history for my character. Here's what I have so far.





The History of Chayne Serenity.



Chayne was abducted at 4 years old. She was taken to a hideous, ruined shack in Iwh. She was told that her parents didn鈥檛 want her anymore and they planned to kill her. She decided not to ask any questions. She was treated as a slave for 8 years. She was forced to kill anyone who came across their facilities, who questioned what she was or whoever they said were spies. She slaughtered animals, suffered from malnutrition and wore rags. One day she got up the courage to plan her escape. No matter what it took she was determined to get out of there and be free. She basically murdered the abductors, but she didn鈥檛 mind. She stuck a stick through one鈥檚 neck and for the other she locked in the basement with nothing but a knife.

Chayne thought that she was the greatest after that, she knew she could do anything. She was the best at everything she did. Whether it was killing, eating, or falling in mud she thought she was it. She was unstoppable. She ran across a rabbit in the woods during her escape, which was the only thing stopping her from going her own way. She tried to catch the rabbit, but it drove her off trail. The rabbit took her to Mabo where she committed treason. She told the nobles of the land that she was better than they could ever be and nothing they did could ever make her say different. Before her punishment was brought out she ran away.

By the time she was 17 years old she knew her limitations. She decided no more set backs on her plans. She was going to go to Maeria and settle down and change her ways. She got there and never made any friends. She fell in love with a dark elf named Ugi. She loves everything about him looks, smile, and how good he is at being good. He never did anything wrong. She figured that he had to love her. She believed he was the most beautiful woman in the world. But Ugi never loved her back. She got sick and tired of him not loving her and being so perfect. She had never seen such a thing and it drove her crazy. She killed him. She took him to the edge of the woods and killed him to his last death. No one ever questioned what happened to him. They thought that when she disappeared he went with her.

Chayne sat in the woods then after until she was 18.





The reason why there wasn't any more is because I'm waiting on my friends' histories to clide into mine. Together we are the 7 deadly sins, mine is Pride. Any suggestions on how to make it better?
Help on a character history?
wha larp lol thanks for the 2 points girl!
Help on a character history?
So...Is Chayne suppose to be Pride incarnate?If so,then you could try some foreshadowing,adding vanity symbols like mirrors and make up.As

for her love interest with the dark elf,you could say that he is the second

most beautiful thing she's ever seen.The first was her of course.Eventually

her arrogance and large ego will lead people on to hating and then people

could try to kill her but because of her murdering skills she gained back

in her childhood she could ruin their plan to kill her.Chayne could also try

overthrowing a leader or a queen of some sort because she believes that

she should be the ruler because she's so powerful.Then rule a certain land and of course fail because she only cares about herself and sees

her people as lowlifes.